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It's a rousing tale and I much enjoyed it. Still, it might benefit from some minor edits.

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"Consternated by this he was to however wait several minutes for his foes’ bickering to persist before he advanced once more."

They were already at the part of the ritual where they advanced on her with knives drawn to cut pieces off of her when he first interrupted them. If he subsequently spent "several minutes" hiding behind a pillar while any of them "continued the ritual", that implies her getting sliced up as he cowers behind a rock.

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