It's kind of you to include me as an expert...I'm not there yet for sure. I read the first chapter, and it looks good. But unfortunately I don't read or write epic fantasy to offer you a genuine critic. I hope others could weigh in.
Ah okay, the second chapter is the real starting event with Charaji separated from Aganyu and from then on the idea is for it to be like Musashi/Gone with the Wind except epic fantasy.
I’m sorry it wasn’t enough to interest you. I really do appreciate you taking the time to read it, it was very kind of you madame.
It's kind of you to include me as an expert...I'm not there yet for sure. I read the first chapter, and it looks good. But unfortunately I don't read or write epic fantasy to offer you a genuine critic. I hope others could weigh in.
Ah okay, the second chapter is the real starting event with Charaji separated from Aganyu and from then on the idea is for it to be like Musashi/Gone with the Wind except epic fantasy.
I’m sorry it wasn’t enough to interest you. I really do appreciate you taking the time to read it, it was very kind of you madame.
I really hope you have a great day anyways.