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Good chapter i like daegan

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Glad to hear it she’s one of my favourite characters even as the author.

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I once again am impressed with Kenna. I know she can be irritable but I at least can hardly blame her. She is a strong woman tasked with running a business and taking care of a wayward son.

Cormag still remains somewhat unfleshed out for me. I am not quite sure why he is such a “moon calf”, and exactly what he was doing with Wulfnoth. Still I sense his agony at his mother’s disappointment. And how much he misses his father.

I always thought Kenna was just pushing her son, that she was more frustrated with him than hateful.

I am beginning to think you intend for something to happen with Kenna and Corin.

Wow I was taken by surprise by those Dark riders. Good job!

Quite the cliff hanger. Hope they make it out. I once again am impressed with Kenna. I know she can be irritable but I at least can hardly blame her. She is a strong woman tasked with running a business and taking care of a wayward son.

Cormag still remains somewhat unfleshed out for me. I am not quite sure why he is such a “moon calf”, and exactly what he was doing with Wulfnoth. Still I sense his agony at his mother’s disappointment. And how much he misses his father.

I always thought Kenna was just pushing her son, that she was more frustrated with him than hateful.

I am beginning to think you intend for something to happen with Kenna and Corin.

Wow I was taken by surprise by those Dark riders. Good job!

Quite the cliff hanger. Hope they make it out.

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