Darkspire Conspiracy Chapter 1: An Unexpected Analysis

My review of the first chapter

The story “The Darkspire Conspiracy” is a story that my brother Joe takes care to write about, and I could tell he puts a lot of thought into his writing. As he and I have agreed to analyze each other’s works in order to help us improve, but also to explore our own potential writing styles and to grow as writers. This is my first analysis into his works…